tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post106942134189543626..comments2017-06-17T11:42:34.506-07:00Comments on NewPinch: BLOODY DREAMNewPinchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03334466188585175342noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-21242870347639973122011-12-14T10:27:32.380-08:002011-12-14T10:27:32.380-08:00very graphic.. keep writing!very graphic.. keep writing!MahwashBhttp://insidedisillusion.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-24916018849610194332011-12-13T06:23:59.989-08:002011-12-13T06:23:59.989-08:00Even at the cost of repeating, I must say it's...Even at the cost of repeating, I must say it's way too 'mature' poem. The words are laden with emotion and meaning. I'm really surprised and proud too. Way to go, NewPinch. Present us more word-pictures of your thoughts and experience.sukumbhohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05979018144619959249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-59876193210591015602011-12-11T10:07:29.439-08:002011-12-11T10:07:29.439-08:00Dear Rasanmeet -
This was an excellent poem! You ...Dear Rasanmeet -<br />This was an excellent poem! You do have a knack for writing! I just love to see how you are excelling in life. The running and now the writing. I am sure your parents are very proud of you! Keep up the good work - what I have learned in life is: hard work never goes to waste and if there is a will, there is a way! I can't wait to instill all of these beliefs in my dear little Manreet. I want to empower her to be the best and never to feel that she can't achieve anything. God Bless you!<br /><br />Keep up the good work,<br />SukhAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-8270477948098160942011-12-11T07:11:10.643-08:002011-12-11T07:11:10.643-08:00Very nice, a great beginning, do keep it up :)- Gu...Very nice, a great beginning, do keep it up :)- Gurpreet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-22215525563590875632011-12-10T23:15:09.127-08:002011-12-10T23:15:09.127-08:00keep dreaming..keep writing....
good luck
jupinder...keep dreaming..keep writing....<br />good luck<br />jupinderjupinderjithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07514974058846841861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-31023633348284022742011-12-10T22:30:18.772-08:002011-12-10T22:30:18.772-08:00Though the poem has a sad backdrop but it all the ...Though the poem has a sad backdrop but it all the more reflects the depth of thought process and the level of maturity of Rasanmeet which is way ahead of her tender age. She will certaily surpass her all rounder mother. Wish her all the best.Balvinder Ballihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05040171846198252874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-49270349990523257522011-12-10T15:54:33.001-08:002011-12-10T15:54:33.001-08:00amazing for a 13 year. teen years are the begining...amazing for a 13 year. teen years are the begining of an era in once's life, but so mature ?. amazingJANMEJA JOHLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04310342797310110392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-73903668245152739432011-12-10T11:06:13.164-08:002011-12-10T11:06:13.164-08:00Are u kidding. Such a mature poem by such a kiddo!...Are u kidding. Such a mature poem by such a kiddo!!! Talented daughter of a superbly talented mom :) Keep rockin kiddoUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10549142893444959051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-17464398886779128382011-12-10T09:43:37.210-08:002011-12-10T09:43:37.210-08:00One word- 'marvelous'. What has astounded ...One word- 'marvelous'. What has astounded me most is, how can a child of 13 write like this? But no, my estimation of this poem is not due to this age factor, rather due to its own merit. The images are so intense, the moments so dark, and the feelings so strong! Even with lines expressing hopelessness, this poet has made me hope for her shining future, as a human, as a human poet. Blessings and Love.Hishamhttp://www.hishamianism.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-52307678488333584772011-12-10T08:39:23.799-08:002011-12-10T08:39:23.799-08:00It is a coincidence that the background of my blog...It is a coincidence that the background of my blog too is the same. i felt I am viewing my own blog. You are courageous to make experiments in writing. I feel happy for you. Do it , experiment and experiment with your full vigour.I will like you to come out and be a keen observer. You are able to say a lot in a few words, so do pick up more from the environ and sum it up with your poetic sense. Be blessed and I will look forward to your more poems on this blog which I will keep following.Jinde raho Lambiyaan umraan.PRANESH NAGRIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11603552012465912321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-60079764937125833062011-12-10T08:36:23.182-08:002011-12-10T08:36:23.182-08:00Such a scary dream! I'm sure you were happy wh...Such a scary dream! I'm sure you were happy when you woke up and realised that it was only a dream.<br />Keep writing- you have a flair.dipalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01070862196307376073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-90948815114624055382011-12-10T08:05:34.621-08:002011-12-10T08:05:34.621-08:00So good to see her writing poems. Maa ka asar hai ...So good to see her writing poems. Maa ka asar hai ! <br />Wishing you all the best, Rasanmeet. Read a lot, scribble away when and where the inspiration strikes you . Even in dreams. Keep notes. You will be grateful for these notes later. <br /><br />Keep writing ! <br />MW<br />TBCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49881738817354296.post-24130339609445825402011-09-05T03:12:24.492-07:002011-09-05T03:12:24.492-07:00Has the little girl grown up so much??
Wake up gi...Has the little girl grown up so much??<br /><br />Wake up girlie its only a dreamy the world is sunny and nice outside. :)Pinkuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06714914168230658950noreply@blogger.com